PLANNING - Mock up Ancillary work, PITCH !

How Was My Pitch?

Summary :

• We were all as a class required to individually present to our teachers a pitch presentation. This was more of a 1 to 1 discussion face to face with the mock ups present for us to dissect and analyze. Personally I used my teachers comments and guidance to come up with some strengths, improvements and weaknesses.

The Mock ups I presented :

• Digipak -

• Advertisement - 

Strengths:

• The strengths clearly were the fact that I had stuck to three colors throughout the three pieces of work consistently and they all worked well together.
• The layout I used for the back of my Digipak front cover and the text for copyright was excellent.

Weaknesses:

• I think my teacher had reminded me that I had to use everything that I created and nothing borrowed or taken off the Internet, this was a bummer as I now could not use the rose design for the back cover and advertisement. This specific part had me excited however I understand I cant use the design unless I draw it myself.

Room For Improvement:

• Definitely considering the three pices of work the advertisement needs the most work and the colour scheme of it does not go well with the rest of the work as black seems to dominate.